Good Lil Cowgirl's Lesson #1 | My Dream Mate

okay, so I made it into a bit of a scenario of meeting him ;)


Good Lil Cowgirl's Lesson #1 | My Dream Mate


As usual, I was on nurse duty at the local rodeo. There were quite a few new cowboys and I couldn't help checking them out. When I first saw him, I knew that he was the one for me. He was about 6'1" with light brown hair & chocolate brown eyes. He had walked in, asking if I could tape his sore ribs before he climbed on his bronc. I mumbled something unintelligible that we both took as a yes. He started unbuttoning his shirt, revealing well defined pecs topped with a small ring running through each nipple.

My gaze drifted south over his flat stomach and on down the start of a narrow treasure trail. I looked up smiling, slicking my tongue out a bit. He returned the gesture showing me his double pierced tongue.

I grabbed the roll of tape and got to work before I lost my ability to think. I took my time, rubbing his chest, ribs, abs, and stomach as I taped him. When I was finished, he grinned. He asked for one more favor. I told him sure. Then he asked me to help him put on his chaps. No problem. He handed me a pair of bright blue fringed chaps. I put them around his waist, buckling them a couple inches below his belt buckle.

I ran my hands down his thighs then grabbed his hips and turning him around. I ran my hands back up the inside of his legs. I buckled the right leg of his chaps then ran my hand over to the other leg, fastening the buckles as I moved my hands down. I stood up, telling him he was all set. I couldn't help but watch as he walked away. The rest of the night all I could think about was how well he filled out those tight wranglers.

Very good ---but you could have been a bit more discriptive about him ---did he have a dimple on his chin---what did he smell like ----were his eyes covered with bushy eyebrows ---did he have a beard or was he clean shaven--etc---theses things are important to see when you write about a subject ---- and help make your readers actually see the subject---it will not be used in all stories ----but it is helpful when you can if nessary get very descriptive ----not only about looks but ---taste ---smell ---his voice ---did he have a deep voice that made you melt when you heard his southren draw? --I hope you can see how these exercises will help you later.

but this was a good start do not get discouraged I will PM you your next exercise.----:ra

thank you :)