One more thing:

First of all, sorry for the few punctuation and grammer goofs in my previous post. Darn! Not enough sleep last night. Me and the girl were up talking till 5am.

Regarding Point of View in my tale, I prefer the 3rd person omniscient. I think the take is most effective if told from that point of view, not from the girl's point of view. The focus on the story should be on her humiliation and the various ways the men choose to torment her. Check-out "Test Subjects" by Xodus, or "Sneaking Out" by Semiater. I like the tone and literary quality of those tales. But that's just me.

The reason I have so much interest in the planning of the girl's abduction in my tale is to build suspense. Too many stories skimp on this aspect of the tale - the build-up - and the stories suffer as a consequence. In addition, for the victim, the revelation that a large group of older men pooled their resources and energies for weeks to plan her abduction, well, that should have a devestating effect on her mental state. The sense of dread she feels, as she comes to realize she'd been the object of their eyes for weeks and months, should only add to her sense of utter helplessness.

Uh, just thought I'd add that little bit.

Take care, and Happy Holidays!!

p.s. Oh yeah, I forgot to mention the various "Tiffany" stories by Dr. Wu and even the short "Mammoth Cave" by Typoman. Other good stories!