WHOA PEOPLE.

This is getting way out of hand here. I'm looking for advice about how to fit BDSM into my story, not advice about doing a take off. If you insist on following the latter, then perhaps we could take this private.

I posted here because this is where I first found the story, AND was hoping for some advice about BDSM, but as I have already said,
I it is unlikely I will post (the story) here.
I am now thinking that since I am getting nowhere, there isn't any point in returning.

Another thing to bear in mind. Katie posted her story in a public forum for which she was paid nothing. I suspect that would make her story public property. Also there are a number of other people who are writing about this situation, and although Katie's story is the best and the most extensive in describing the overall situation, it is by no means the definitive one.