Quote Originally Posted by Athenna
Well,

What can i say more than to say that, english is not my first language. And so at times i face troubles writing such in english.

I'd very well be gald if someone is willing to help me out with it!

thanks. And this is the story .

Do contact me on my mail, for further discussion.

Athenna.
May I ask, what *is* your first language? The story is articulately written, and begs polishing. I'm happy to try, if it hasn't already been worked on by someone else.

Cheers,
Robyn