Here are six dependable "rules" that will help track down and eliminate deadwood:

1. Never use an adjective if a stronger, more specific noun will do.
2. Never use an adverb if a stronger, more specific verb will do.
3. Never use a phrase if a single, more specific adjective or adverb will do.
4. Never use a clause if a phrase will do.
5. Never use a sentence if a clause will do.
6. Never use a compound sentence if a compound predicate will do.

In other words, don�t use unnecessary words! For example, if you�re writing about a �wise old man,� call him a �sage.� It means the same thing, but uses one word instead of three.