Apart from still being too brutal for my taste i rather like this intro... i like how you describe whats going on inside her... the disgust, the thinking about others that still have to go her way, and how she lost all struggle on a hard path ;-)
I also like the details like the rattling chain of the hobble or that the shackles are blody because they rub the prisoners ankles raw...


no evil grin here.. sory...
deigja