Sentence Fragments and Run-on sentences

[drkfetyshnyghts]

When I write. I write like I'm living it. Feeling it. To obey all the conventions of proper english and proper writing would ruin the flow for me. Surely in BDSM writing, its the content and the mind of the writer rather than the technical competence that is most important? The ramblings of a twitsed mind!

Probably I am missing something. But then I am a girl.

drky xxx

[jeanne]

When I write. I write like I'm living it. Feeling it. To obey all the conventions of proper english and proper writing would ruin the flow for me. Surely in BDSM writing, its the content and the mind of the writer rather than the technical competence that is most important? The ramblings of a twitsed mind!

This works great if you're writing for yourself. Or, writing to get an idea on paper - which you will then edit. But to write in a way that makes no sense and has no natural flow for another reader - means you won't have other readers.

Probably I am missing something. But then I am a girl.

What? Are you implying girl = not smart? Surely you aren't.